Thursday, September 20, 2012

Other People's Responses

I liked Taiseer's response because it had his ideas and it was backed up by the quotations he put in it.  He thinks bigger by quotations in it to show what he is saying. He also shows us what the characters think in the story and how they don't feel like it was their fault for what happened. He tells us what happens in all 13 tapes and what happened in the last tape. This is what i like about Taiseer's response.

I also like Chris reading response because he puts in information about Steve Jobs, what he achieved in his whole life. He writes who he worked with, and what they came up with. He also talked about the college he went to and wrote his childhood too. He says what happened after and before he was adopted. In the end he writes what happened when he was  at the end of his carrer and what he had.

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